The Best story writer here. Drop your prologue

#1
Here is mine...
Title:The Risen Sword.
Author:Francischuxx

Prologue...
The vultures were all perched on the trees around the grassland, except for those still hovering, and some that flies away only to be seen coming back with their relatives and friends.

Within quarter an hour, the surrounding trees were all filled with scavengers of different kinds. Some that were not comfortable perching on the bird filled branches were seen on the grasses and some still hovered around.

It seems there is gonna be a feast today for all savengers of various species.

Rumours of death is an understatement, the smell of death covered the whole scene like a fog in the wood.

The silence in the field was so intensed that it seemed as if the gods of thunder,lightning, war, stones, Sand, air, iron, water, fire and other sub gods and goddesses were being buried that day and were given a solemn silence that would last for like forever.

The silence in the field was soon interrupted by galloping sounds of some barded war horses and their heavily armoured riders.

The galloping sounds lead through the wood to the open field. The field that was so quiet contained over three hundred thousand valiant men of ear with their armours in full.
They were in two groups facing each other with an expressionless look on their faces.

They were so mean and never thought that someone or people will end up not going back to their homes.
...no wonder the birds were waiting with confidence and none went out to look for what to eat because they were so sure that there would be food in surplus very soon.


The galloping horses went to a halt in front of a group that was about four times greater than the enemy army.

The horses that arrived were six in numbers and the riders were believed to be high ranked officials.
The first horse to arrive was spotless brown and the rider appeared in a brown armour to match his horse.

Immediately after their arrival, the first rider stepped down and the whole army went on their knees and simultaneously removing their helmets including the riders thy came with him.

Him?
He must be physically built if he's a Him but he is so sleek and slender...

Oh my...
But... He can't be accorded with such respect if he's not a king of the chief warlord to the king...

Mmm he looks beautiful even if his face is not seen...
His breast plate protrudes to give a chest that seems like a breast, No, its just a pseudo breast...
But... But... I...I... Oh my gosh!!!

He's a she... She's a she... Ammin It's a she...

She's a woman.



She removed her medieval ceremonial helmet and the cool breeze of the field made her smile...

She didn't really smile at the breeze but the birds that are waiting for food are almost tired of waiting.
That made her smile.

Don't worry, I promise to give you what to eat for a long time.
She said to herself.
She was beautiful facially and otherwise, she looks more like a goddess of war and beauty combined in one being.
Her smile gave way to the beautiful goddess of beauty to appear on her face or maybe she was her mother and the god of war her father.
Her beauty knew no bound as the breeze blew and her hair was seen flowing with the direction of the passing air, that made her shake her head in a slow manner and this single act could have made the camp of her enemy explode and cause them to start the fight within themselves.
(I was just thinking).

She was physically beautiful but internally, she's a beast. Easy to anger and her anger is wrath.



She is the one, go meet her... Deliver the kings message to her in person... Her name is...


Her name is NIHANA!
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#2
Pls. Don't tell me to write the story cos am not yet ready.
The story will be here early next year.
Thanks.
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#3
@Francischuxx.
You seems a great writer, I like your spacing and paragraphing pattern. Makes reading your posts easier.
Kudos!
Waiting for your story...
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#4
(07-10-2017, 05:40 PM)Ojukwu Wrote: @Francischuxx.
You seems a great writer, I like your spacing and paragraphing pattern. Makes reading your posts easier.
Kudos!
Waiting for your story...
Thanks Bro...
Its gonna be ready soon.
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#5
wht kinda story is it
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#6
From the title u should know its the spartan kinda story.
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#7
i seens to be great excited any time i read ur story :you are excellent keep it up.
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#8
(25-10-2017, 02:47 PM)Sanctus Wrote: i seens to be great excited any time i read ur story :you are excellent keep it up.
Thanks a lot.
The story is soon loading live in gobiafra.
I'll really love your presence.
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#9
lol u are wow.
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#10
@Omaa
With the above prologue, can you get me a perfect cover?
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#11
(26-10-2017, 04:42 PM)Francischuxx Wrote: @Omaa
With the above prologue, can you get me a perfect cover?
sure bro, wait on it
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#12
Thanks a lot @omaa
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#13
(26-10-2017, 07:21 PM)Francischuxx Wrote: Thanks a lot @omaa

you welcome
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#14
Nice one guy,keep it up.
Am not 2 good at writing all I love and do is music and beat making.
I'm Gidoski ••••••••••
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